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Wednesday, May 16, 2018

May 16th- Oral Commentary Information

Oral presentation scoring guide: Oral Commentary Scoring Guide

Look over my feedback on your thesis. Remember your thesis is about the implications of the device usage.

Once you have established your outline, start talking it through. Mark where you feel you are weak or struggling. Then work on those areas. Do not forget practicing integrating the literary text. This will take practice to get you comfortable with the process. Word of advice... do not use long quotes.. break them up. It will be easier to follow for the audience, and easier for you to relate back to your thesis.

Here are a couple of Individual Oral Presentation examples from IB students. Remember, your commentaries will not be this long, your presentations will be 7-8 minutes. The other thing to be realistic about is that these two students have more experience with literary analysis than you do... you will get there... This is how we start.

Pay attention to:
1. The manner in which they speak about literature (analysis, not plot summarization).
2. How they present their literary analysis thesis
3. How they integrate textual evidence into their commentaries.
4. Their use of notes... presentation is more conversation than reading.

Oral Commentary Example #1

Oral Commentary Example #2

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